Unforgettable Gift for Your Valentine Sweetheart

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By Enelle Lamb

Priorities...

In keeping with the romantic, Valentine's, true love, love of a lifetime theme, I would like to share with you, my tribute (or Ode, as it were) to my own love.

I wrote this song in the summer of 2004, at a time when I was struggling to make a fresh start on my own with my kids. Every aspect of my life was bordering on chaotic - my son's social disability and problems in school, my daughter's evolution to adulthood, no social life, (who had time?) no career possibilities and my own romantic complications and challenges were enough to send me screaming mindlessly to the psych ward.

One of the few things that kept me sane was my music. Whenever I could find a quiet moment I would drag out my guitar and play. It was difficult to focus my thoughts, as there was so much going on around me and so little time to get everything that needed doing, done, but somehow, my guitar helped me sort out the important things.

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"So I have to say I love you, in a song..."

Everyone at one time or another has sung along with the great crooners of our time to express their love and desire for their sweetheart.

It seems every time we turn on our radios there is another ballad that tugs on our heartstrings and reminds us just how special that certain someone is to us.

My personal favorite, aside from my own composition of course, is "Amazed" by Lonestar.

What's in a word

Most people think that they don't have what it takes to write a song - let alone one that tells the world how you feel about your love interest. Nothing could be farther from the truth - true, your words may never be aired for the rest of us to hear, but that shouldn't be the reason not to put pen to paper, or verse to music.

Getting warmer

So without any further ado, I give you "Too Hot" - my celebration of the love of my life.

Hard man child
Blue eyed and wild
He touches me and time just seems to fly

Warm soft skin
A body made for sin
He looks at me and makes me want to cry

Day by day
Needing him to stay
He takes me where I've never been before

Just don't know
Which way I should go
He kisses me and leaves me craving more

Too hot - I know I shouldn't do it
But he's got what I'm longing for
So wrong - I'm fighting every minute
But it's too strong - I'm wanting more and more

One more time
If wanting him's a crime
I'll gladly take my chances on the run

Sell my soul
Forty pieces of gold
So I can have my day in the sun

Chorus:
Too hot - I know I shouldn't do it
But he's got what I'm longing for
So wrong - I'm fighting every minute
But it's too strong - I'm wanting more and more

© Enelle Lamb 2004, all rights reserved

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Comments

myawn profile image

myawn 2 years ago

Nice song passionate and original I like it!

Enelle Lamb profile image

Enelle Lamb Hub Author 2 years ago

Welcome myawn :) thank you so much! So glad you like it.

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creativeone59 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Wow, it sounds hot, thanks for sharing it. Godspeed. creativeone59

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RedElf Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Great song, Enelle - too bad we couldn't hear the tune as well! Great entry into the fray - this one could become a Valentine's Day standard!

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Feline Prophet Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

How can we hear you sing it as well? :)

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beadydani 2 years ago

I think you should make a video of you singing the song. No doubt you have a beautiful voice, very romantic indeed.

Thank you for sharing and don't stop singing or sharing.

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bearclawmedia Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

I am touched by this. I love the sentiment. I am with red elf on this one and others we want you to post it on u tube.

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Enelle Lamb Hub Author 2 years ago

creativeone59 - thanks so much :)

Hi Red :D - you know I did think of recording it and putting that up...might just do that one day ;) LOL

Welcome FP :D - Judging by all the comments, I might just have to do that :P

beadydani - Welcome and thank you - so pleased to meet you!

bearclawmedia - so glad you enjoyed my song - not sure about utube though LOL...we'll see ;)

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jill of alltrades Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Wow! That's HOT! I hope he appreciated that when you wrote and first sang it for him!

Thanks for sharing!

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Enelle Lamb Hub Author 2 years ago

Hello jill - yes, he did appreciate it, very much. I think I surprised him ;) I don't think anyone had ever shown affection like that - LOL and to write a song! But yes, he was quite proud of my accomplishment.

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Lita C. Malicdem Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

This is another variety written about love, saying it through songs. I can't ask for more. Beautiful hub.

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Enelle Lamb Hub Author 2 years ago

Welcome Lita C. Malicdem, and thank you for the wonderful compliment! So pleased you enjoyed it :D

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